Well, I have to say it's the first English Harry Potter drabble I read. I thought it was great. I love the play you did with the words "scar" and "scared". But really what was best was the story. I always find incredible how some people manage to put so much actions, feelings in only 100 words. Your drabble was no exception, except maybe yours have a bigger story. We don't know exactly what happened, since it is not canonical, but we can imagine and build our own story. And the story I saw, even though it is not exactly a happy one, was one I enjoyed for all you say in so few words. And Hermione reacts so much like a victim should that it's almost sad. Well, okay, it is sad.

Poor Hermione... *cry* I think you're really bright, if you maternal language is french, and you can write something english... Wow.

I really like it, but that's short. Anyway, where do you learnt to speak english ?

Réponse de l'auteur: Thank you! It's a drabble, it's supposed to be short ;) I learnt a bit of English at school, and the rest by myself ;)

Hey, I learnt new vocabulary : "jaw" ! Bon, je ne me lance pas dans la review en anglais par peur du ridicule (eh non, je ne suis probablement pas une Gryffondor dans une autre vie...xD). J'ai bien aimé, mais dis moi, il me semble que tu extrapolles par rapport au canon non ? Sinon j'ai manqué quelque chose. Il faut vraiment que je relise les livres. Un joli texte en tout cas, très sensible.

Réponse de l'auteur: Oui, j'extrapole, je ne crois pas que Hermione ait été touchée par Greyback. Cependant, les insinuations étaient clairement là, à mon sens...

Pretty well done... But I think I prefer your french drabbles. Maybe your sentences are a bit too long, which makes the comprehension more difficult. And also some words I wouldn't have chosen for such a short text. But I still liked it! (And I'm sorry to criticize your drabble like that, I wouldn't be able to write better anyway, and in french neither^^...)

Sia

PS: Since you're writing in english, could you maybe send me the end of the translation?

Réponse de l'auteur: Don't be sorry to criticize, it is normal! I am sure this drabble is far from being perfect, I still have to improve my English skills. It's weird you did not get the other half of the translation though! I'm pretty sure I sent it to you ages ago! Anyway, I'll look for it in my computer and send it to you tomorrow - right now, I'm off to bed ;)

Stories like yours are just awful. Not the way it’s written because it’s well written, there’s no doubt on it. I don’t feel very comfortable with the situation (I mean rape and harassment in general) I think it’s probably normal but I read because I love the way you write and almost all of your texts are little “jewels” . And again I’m not disappointed. Without describing what happened there you pointed out all the consequences of such an “act” and that’s powerful. There’s nothing to add. In hundred words you said everything.

PS : I won’t say thank you for sharing this because right now I’m uneasy.

Réponse de l'auteur: I absolutely understand your feeling. I still don't really know why I posted this drabble, to be honest. I mean, writing it seemed obvious to me, I had to write it, but sharing it? I am still pretty unsure. I probably needed it, but... I still don't know why, really. Anyway, thanks a lot for reading and reviewing in English, especially as you are saying nice things about my writing skills. Once again, I'm really touched, thank you!

I will go to write a very short review because i've got a very bad english.
I love your texte, when i was reading your texte , i said " Yeah, i understand what she wants to say".
I think i haven't understand every details but i'm proud of me.
So, i will go to say to you Congratulations.
Hum, i hope you will understand.


I just want to know, who is this man ?

Réponse de l'auteur: No problem, I understand what you meant! It is really nice to read and review in English even if you are not very comfortable with this language! As for the man, in my mind he is Greyback, because when I read that part where they are brought to the Malfoy Manor in Deathly Hallows, all the things Greyback said to Hermione were just screaming "SEXUAL MEANING!" to me XD Thanks again! :D

I'm still trying to guess who he is... But well, whatever, I like it ;-)

Réponse de l'auteur: In my mind, he was Greyback. I'm sure you did not miss the sexual hints he made towards Hermione when she was brought to Malfoy Manor along with Ron, Harry, Dean and Griphook ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing in English, it is very much appreciated!